瑪姬的作文

最近我寫文章速度遲緩，一篇文章寫了兩個禮拜還沒完成。正好不久前瑪姬寫了一篇讓老師大大讚賞的作文，正本還被老師拿去當做三年級的寫作範本。媽媽看了自嘆不如，當然就不客氣的先拿來頂著用啦！

這篇瑪姬的英文作文，比起之前的中文故事接龍流暢許多，但還是看得出是出自同一顆天馬行空的腦袋……

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Enlarging Potion

The label on the jar said “Enlarging Potion”.[註1] I didn’t believe it would work. I was in a laboratory [註2] called “The Crazy Lab”. I decided to try the potion on my cat Silver. Silver was a she-cat with blue eyes and a silvery pelt with a white muzzle. She also has a striking pink nose. I snatched [註2] the potion and charged home. I tiptoed to Silver’s water bowl and poured in the potion. This is just a test. I told myself, still I was worried. What if something bad happens to Silver? What if the potion makes Silver sick? I shuddered, then I thought that I should go watch TV to shake my mind off [註3] my troubles. I woke up the next morning and turned the TV off. I looked at the clock, holy cow! [註4] It was 8:38! I checked Silver’s bowl. The bowl was empty. “Hooray!” I said. All I have to do now was to check Silver. Uh-oh I think she grew a bit too big, here is a picture of her.

In a matter of time I started to panic. What will I do? I thought to myself, then I got a great idea! I rushed back to the “crazy lab” and grabbed a bottle of shrinking potion. I gave the potion to my cat. Silver shrank back to normal the next day. “Hooray” I said. I will never forget the time when I snatched [註2] the “Enlarging Potion”.

[註1] 文中有多處是我幫瑪姬補上的標點符號，她常忘記。
[註2] 訂正了原稿中拼錯的字。
[註3] 原稿上寫 of，但我覺得應該是 off。
[註4] HOLY COW! 這位小朋友竟然連這都寫進作文哦！

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